Saturday, August 30, 2014

Part 46



Shaan took the card and tore into pieces

All looked at him shocked, khanak became nervous and shocked at the same time

Akshay: chotey...tumne card kyu pardiya...( looked at him )

Sunil: shaan kya baat hai.........( little serious )

Romit: shaan tume uski desing or colour pasad nahi aye kya........... ( control

himself not to laugh )

Raj: wese agar yeh acha nahi laga.....toh humne kahi durse cards banwaye

hai

Raj show him another card “ wese muje bhi woh ache nahi lage..pehle wale.”

Shaan raised himself from a couch control himself not to burst anything wrong

Khushboo: areh khanak koh bhi toh dikhao...........khanak betho yaha khari kyu

ho......tumari bhi pasad hume pata honi chahiye ......akhir tumari hi toh sagai

hai .....( smiled and looked at shaan )

Khanak looked at shaan

Shaan: dad yeh sagai nahi hosakti .............. (looked at sunil )

All raised from where they sat, khanak too stand slowly, she became nervous and

scared at the same time almost with teary eyes

Madhvi: shaan tum yeah kya kehraheho......yeah sagai kyu nahi hosakti .....( moved near shaan )

Sunil: eek minute Madhvi............muje baat karne doh.........ha toh batao shaan

kyu yeah sagai nahi hoskti .............( serious but laugh in side with a joy )

Shaan: kyuki dad mein ................ ( but Raj interrupt him )

Raj: Shaan muje lagta hai kuch bhi kehnese pehle eek bar tum yeah sare card

toh dekhlo............phir tum joh chaho kehna

Shaan tighten his jaw and clenched his hand into a fist

Shaan:dekho Raj..................... muje kuch bhi dekhne kih zarurat nahi hai....mein

ne eek bar kehdiya ...key yeah sagai nahi hogi matlab nahi hogi aur agar

aplogene karneki kosh bhi kih nah toh bohut bura hoga.......( looked at Raj first and then to all the members)

Akshay: chotey pehle tum hume yeah baata.............keh problem kya hai tum is

sagai seh.............( face shaan )

All other were enjoying and control their laugh but Madhvi was gesturing them to stop all this drama and khanak was getting very nervous

Jay: bhai......aap eek bar card toh dekhlo phir.............aap joh bhi kahenge hum

maan lenge

Shaan looked at Jay with an angry look

Sunil: Khanak beta.....tum bhi kuch bolo...........tumeh toh koi ehtaraz nahi hai

nah iss sagai se.......( turn to khanak)

Khanak became nervous and looked at shaan

Khanak: adda...........woh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Fumbled with words and scared to speak)

Shaan: dad khanak koh bhi iss sagai seh ehteraz hai..................( moved near

Khanak)

Sunil:shaan mein Khanak se puch rahahu.....tumse nahi......toh ha batao

khanak kya tumeh iss rishteh seh ehtraz hai

Khanak: Adda ........mein............yeah sagai nahi karsakti........woh....( teary eyes )

Sunil: thikh hai agar tum dono kah yahi fesla hai toh yehi sahi.........( turn his

face from them and wide smile spread on his face )

All rest where smiling inward

Sunil: Madhvi......... Maa se kehdo yaha aneki koi zarurat nahi hai shaan aur

Khanak ki koi sagai nahi horahihe...........une dukh toh zarur hoga lekin hum

kuch bhi nahi karsakte jab dono neh maan kardiya hao toh

Shaan: haa.........mom aap please dadi seh dehdo keh................( then he realise

what sunil said )

Shaan and Khanak turn to each other in shock

Shaan: dad..........aapne kya kaha................

Madhvi: lekin sunil........Maa toh yaha askti hai nah Raj ki sagai meh.............

agar shaan neh mana kardiya toh kya...woh Raj aur Nidhi kih sagai mein toh

asakti hai na

Shaan and khanak to themselves slowly Raj aur Nidhi kih sagai and looked at each

other again

Khushboo: haa dad.............hum neh shaan kih sagai planning kih thi woh toh

aabh possible nahi hai....dono neh maana kardiya .......lekin hum Raj aur Nidhi

kih sagai toh dumdamse karsakte hai nah

Shaan again tried to say something, move near sunil and Madhvi but again

interrupted by Akshay

Shaan: dad muje apse baat karni hai.............

Sunil: tumeh joh kehna tha tum woh kehchuke.................... shaan aur humne

tumara felsa bhi manliya

Shaan: areh ese kese mera fesla manliya aap logo nein..................

Akshay, Raj, Jai and Khushboo chuckle and saw various changing expression of

shaan

Raj: dekho shaan tumne khud kaha keh tum khanak se sagai nahi karsakteh

Aur hum sabne tumara fesla manliya toh aabh tume kya problem hai

Shaan: eek minute Raj.....mein dad se baat kar rahahu ..............dad app meri aur Khanak kih sagai kih baat kar rahethe .................

Sunil: shaan abhi hum iss bare meh koi baat nahi karenge............pehle humeh saab invites cancel karne honge...........aur saare cards bhi parne honge..............Jay..........woh sare cards jalado ...........( smiling turn to

Madhvi)

Madhvi plead him through her eyes to stop it but sunil was in teasing mood

Jay: think hai uncle............. ( took all cards )

Khanak and shaan looked at each other

Shaan: ekk minute Jay...............woh cards muje doh ...........shaan snatched

the card from him and saw what was written Attend the Engagement


ceremony of their lovely Children Khanak to Shaantanu 

Sunil: insare cards ka aabh koi faida nahi hai.... ( snatched the card which shaan hold )

All other were enjoying shaan’s irritation

Shaan : dad aap mere saath ese nahi karsakte..( looked toward sunil )

Sunil: mein neh kya kiya shaan..........

Shaan: dad aap yeah sagai nahi rok sakte

Sunil: shaan yeh fehsla tumara aur Khanak kah tha.........keh tum dono yeah sagai nahi karsakteh.........isme mein neh kya kiya

Shaan: yeah sagai hogi dad kyu mein khanak seh bohut pyaar karta hu aur

All looked at him

Sunil: dekho shaan mein janta hu tumne yeah fesla kyu badla....apni dadi keh liye ........lekin hum Maa koh samjadenge

Khanak: Adda.....woh....shaan....

Sunil: nahi khanak......hum tumare saath zabarzasti nahi karsakteh ( turn and smiled to Akshay )

Khanak: lekin adda.........mein bhi shaan.........se...

Madhvi came near Khanak

Madhvi: koi baat nahi khanak.......hum tumare liye tumare pasad keh ladke keh saath tumari shaadi kar denge

Shaan: bassssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All looked at him

Shaan: bass!!!!!!!!!!...bohut huwa.......kabse koi meri baat sunhi nahi raha.....hadh hai yaar

Akshay gesture Khushboo with his eyes brows with see now

Sunil: tumari hi baat toh sunni humne..............

Shaan: dad mein Khanak seh pyaar karta hu aur khanak bhi mujse pyaar karti hai.........( said in one go)

Sunil: ha toh humne kaabh mana kiya...........tum dono neh hi toh maana kardiya....ismen humara kya kasoor

Shaan: haa lekin apne pehle kaha hi nahi kiski sagai horahihe

Madhvi: dekho shaan tumne hi card read nahi kiya toh aabh tum hume blame nahi kar sakteh

Shaan: ek minute aap logo koh kese pata keh hum ek..dus....re.......seh..Pyaar karteh hai .....(looked at them )

All laugh at him

Khanak and shaan looked at them confused

Jay: wese Di this is very bad apne mujse bhi chupaya keh aap shaan bhai se pyaar kartehai...........aur usdin apne bhai koh pardeh keh piche chupadiya ........(started to laugh and all joined him )

Khanak looked at shaan

Khanak: jay..............

Jay: what Jay di.....agar muje pehle batadiya hota toh mein apki sagai pehle sehi garwadeta.....toh bhai ko bar bar parde keh piche chupneki zarurat hi nahi parti...( smiling )

Khanak gave jay a killing look and all laugh alot seeing their various facialy expressions

Shaan got embarrassed and said “ pardeke piche koun chupata...woh toh mein bas....”

Jay: kya woto mein bhai.......

Shaan: Jay tumeh toh mein nahi chorunga

Khushboo: agar pehle batadete toh yeah natak nahi karte hum

Shaan: toh aap saab koh pehle seh hi pata tha........aur phir bhi apne Raj aur Khanak ki shaadi ki baat kih

All said “ HAA!!!!!!!!!!!!” and laugh

Shaan: aur yeah sara plan kiska tha ................. ( hand across his chest )

Sunil raised his collar but all said “ Dadi”

Shaan and khanak: Kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dadi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( then looked at each other )

Sunil: areh kya dadi.................. mene bhi kitne sare plan banaye..( pout )

Raj: aur mene bhi.............not to forgot

Akshay: haa..............tumara Nidhi koh patameka kah plan ............( smiled widely )

Khushboo: wese Khanak.................tum kuch nahi kahoge ....(hit her shoulder with hers and smiled )

Khanak shyly lower her head

Khushboo: aye!!!!!!! hayeeee!!!!!!! Abh kesa sharmana......meri devrani

Khanak: Bhabhiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( smile shyly )

Madhvi moved to khanak and said

Madhvi: yeh toh hamesh meri beti hithi ...aur hamesha rahengi ...( kissed her lovingly on her forehead khanak’s eyes welled up with happy tears )

Madhvi hug her and khushboo

Khushboo: Mom...please no rona dhona.. ( and hugged khanak too )

Sunil move too,khanak took touched his feet and took his blessing

Shaan: areh mein bhi hu yaha...tum saab toh muje bulgai.....

All chuckled

Akshay: haa bhai...tum bhi ho.....yaha lekin tumne humari khanak koh bohut rulaya hai, kyu raj!!

Raj: yeah.......!!! aur mere saath kitna rudely behave kiya

Shaan: ohh!!!! Hello mein neh khanak koh kabhi nahi rulaya

Jay: wese bhai....u are very luck keh apko di mili as a partner

Shaan: wah!!!! Abh saabne party badaldi

Raj: wese khanak sahi kehti thi..bachpan se keh tum burthal ho aaj bhi wesehi ho

Shaan looked at raj

Shaan: ekk minuted tumein kese pata khanak muje burthal bulatithi

joh keh mein nahi hu

Raj moved toward khanak, shaan just looked at him

Raj: wese khanak tumhi muje batao......school mein bhi shaan burthal hi tha nah

Khanak looked at raj surprise

Khanak: tumeh kese pata Raj....... ( looked at him )

Shaan moved toward khanak all other were looking at him

Raj: hii!! Mein Rajveer Malhotra ...( extend hand for a handshake )

Khanak whisper his “ Rajveer Malhotra.” and looked at Raj and shaan too whisper his name

Raj: Khanak this is not fair tum muje kese bhulsakti ho....hum school mein saath the aur shaan tum bhulgae rock n roll.....

Khanak looked at shaan, he thought and it clicks his mind

Shaan: rajveer tum..i mean Raj... rock n roll ( laughed )

Khanak looked at shaan as she saw him at the first time and whisper “ rock n roll.”

Shaan: areh khanak woh joh hum neh school meh dance kiyatha rock n roll ... yaad aya jisme eek ladka Sharma tatha ladki keh saath dance karneko

In school day in one of the school function , boys were been given a partner to dance. Raj was very shyly so he refused to dance on the song rock n roll but latter he agreed So from that day shaan was calling him rock n roll

Khanak: haa woh!!!!....................point to Raj and said rajveer...!!

Shaan and Raj hug each and khanak had a wide smile on her face to see her old school friend

Raj: finally!!!! Yaad aya......wese khanak tumne notice kiya shaan koh woh ladki yaad ayi ...( teasing shaan ) woh milithi muje aur shaan ka pooch rahithi

Khanak: kya!!!! .... ( looked at shaan ) tum jante ho use aaj bhi...( to shaan )

Raj winked at Akshay and all other just watch their teasing

Shaan: nahi yaar khanak mein nahi janta use......marwaoge kya!!! ( to raj )

Sunil: acha aabh tumlogo ka intro hogaya toh aabh hum ageh keh bareme soche

Madhvi: haa sunil aabh hameh kitni tayari karnihe

Khushboo: Yes mom its time for shopping ........... chalo khanak shopping chalet hai

Shaan: Haa Khanak chaloo shopping chalet hai ...... ( smiling )

Khushboo: Shaan!!! ( Hand on her chest ) wese tumari aur Khanak kih aabh sagai aur phir shadi honewali hai isiliye no mila ok .... ( teasing Shaan )

Shaan: What no milna..... Chalo khanak hum chlte hai

Madhvi: Shaan Khushboo sahi kehrahihe to mila julna ajse

Shaan: Mom Aabhi....!!!! (Irritated )

Jay: Wes bhai don’t worry aap di seh milsakte hai ...... Parde keh piche . All started laughing n tease shaan

Shaan: Jay!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aaj tuto gaya kamse ruko .....( Jay started running and shaan behind him )

Sunil: Yeh bache bhi………….. Aabh chalo bohut sari tayari karni hai aur Maa ati bhi hongi

6 comments:

  1. Shanak ban gaye popat :-P :-P rajbeer rock n poll hehe kya name hai totally rocking update B-)

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  2. yayayayyayay u updated after sooooo long time
    thanx for continuing again i wanted to see the end :)
    i juz LOVE IT awww all teasing shanak so much
    itna nahi karna chahiye tha bechare shanak
    we know shan will meet khanak parde ke piche ;)
    so looking forward for it :)

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    1. Thank u Jalis for following it and waiting for an update
      Yes all love to tease shanak and they will still meet parde keh pich ;) heheheheh

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  3. hey

    so nice to read it after soooo long

    loved it

    shanak finally confessed their love to the family :)

    but now the problem is they cant be together as they are going to marry , so no milna jhulna , :(

    but our desperate shaan will surely able to find the reason to meet his lady love :)

    lovely update

    sorry for short comment will comment in detail surely soon , please allow me some time :)

    Lots of love :*

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  4. Hey sweetie thanx for reading and don't worry about commenting
    take ur time n enjoy reading

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